“There once were two brothers, named Jatayu and Sampathi. However, this was no ordinary pair of brothers. Jatayu and Sampathi were the two most majestic eagles that ever lived, with beautiful feathers and wings that spanned almost thirty feet. Like the two of you, Jatayu and Sampathi loved to compete with one another in every way possible. One day, Jatayu challenged Sampathi to a competition to see who could fly higher. Without responding, Sampathi took off toward the sky and Jatayu raced to keep up. The two birds flapped their wings with all their might, soaring past the highest trees, tallest mountains, and, eventually, the clouds. At an instant, Jatayu blew past Sampathi and turned back to taunt his older brother. ‘What’s the matter? Can’t keep up?’ Jatayu asked mockingly. As Sampathi glanced in his brother’s direction, he noticed faint waves of smoke rising from his wings. In their competition, the two failed to realize that they had climbed well into the outer layer of the atmosphere, where there is little protection from the sun’s powerful rays. ‘Jatayu, your wings! We must descend!” Sampathi begged, but Jatayu would not fall prey to his brother’s trickery. Sampathi realized that his brother would not end the competition and hurried to get ahead of him. Just as Sampathi managed to protect Jatayu in the shadow of his wings, the older brother burst into flames. The flames greatly injured Sampathi’s wings, sending him in a downward spiral toward the Earth. Jatayu dove after his brother in a desperate attempt to save him. Jatayu reached Sampathi in time to wrap him in his wings, just before hitting the ground. When they awoke, Sampathi no longer had his wings. Fortunately, a sage happened upon the brothers and offered himself to care for them in their time of weakness.”
(Two Eagles Soaring: Intimate Love Divine)
Author’s Note: In the
original story, the two brothers were not competing, but trying to catch a
glimpse of heaven. During their climb, they crossed paths with the sun god, who
grew very irritated and attacked them. I thought that the idea of a competition
between two brothers would make for a better bedtime story. I also liked how
the story could be tied into The Ramayana as a whole.
Bibliography: Narayan,
R. K. (1972) The Ramayana
I really liked your version of the story! You are very creative in how you turned it into a bed time story that a father told his children. It was funny how at the end the father almost did not tell the kids the ending of the story. That really reminded me of movies. I have not seen one formatted like this and I really enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteWow Austin! This was really creative, I'm definitely impressed. I love the bedtime storytelling style that you used! I also liked that you had the father telling the story of two brothers to his two sons so they could relate to Jatayu and Sampathi! I also felt like there was somewhat of a moral in there about being too competitive with your siblings, because it resulted in Sampathi losing his wings. Although Sampathi regains his wings, I think the boys will find the next bedtime story to be very sad because Jatayu dies. He definitely died a hero though!
ReplyDeleteGreat story Austin! I really enjoyed the bed time story take. It reminded me of all the American Indian stories my grandpa would tell me as a kid. The dialog between the father and sons also made it very believable. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHello Austin!! Once again, I love the way you are able to turn these tales into bedtime stories; it really helps to highlight some of the main themes and morals in the tales. I have to say, the way you had the older brother Sampathi protect Jatayu, even knowing he risked his own wings, was a great addition to the story!! I can totally imagine a protective older brother saving his sibling from a competition gone wrong, and it's a great twist. Excellent work!
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