When
they reached the base of the mountain, Rama and Lakshmana climbed to the top of
the tallest tree and strung their bows, Hanuman stood at the base of the
mountain, ready to protect his closest friend, and Sugreeva began to taunt his
warmongering brother. Vali heard his brother’s petty challenges and could feel
that he had finally set foot off of the mountain, unprotected by Sage Matanga’s
curse. Vali equipped his armor and quickly departed toward his brother. When
the two brothers finally caught a glimpse of one another, each one pounded his
chest and let out a deafening screech. The battle had begun. Vali was much
larger than his younger brother and clearly more experienced in hand-to-hand combat,
but Sugreeva was agile and wise. For several hours, Sugreeva ran circles around
his older brother, dodging Vali’s attacks, condemning him or his actions and
trying to explain what really happened, but Vali would not listen. As the
battle progressed Sugreeva grew tired, but Vali was used to long-lasting
battles. When his brother stopped to rest, Vali raced toward him and kicked him
with all of his might. Sugreeva fell to the ground, grasping his side, where
Vali had broken several ribs. Rama knew that Sugreeva could not last any
longer. As Vali approached his younger brother, both hands raised high above
his head, ready to deliver the final blow, Rama quickly drew an arrow and
delivered it to Vali’s heart.
Vali
removed the arrow from his chest and read Rama’s name from the head of the
arrow. “Show yourself, coward!” demanded Vali. “I’ve heard stories about your noble
ways and unrivaled marksmanship, yet you interfere with a conflict between
brothers and slay one from the safety of the trees. You know nothing of honor,
nor do you respect the rules of war.” At this moment, Rama emerged from the
trees, his faced was red with anger. “How dare you challenge the honor of my
ways! Your brother cared for you and did his best to protect you. He took care
of your kingdom in your absence and you rewarded him by trying to take his
life. He has lived in fear atop Mount Matanga all of these years, while you
sleep safely inside the walls of your kingdom with his wife.”
In his
final moments, Vali realized the corruption that came with his gift of
strength. He had betrayed his own brother and treated him like an enemy. Vali
sincerely regretted his actions and apologized for the years of torment that he
had brought upon everyone. With his last breath, he gazed at Rama. “You are
truly a great warrior. Watch over my brother and see to it that he is restored
to his rightful position on the throne of Kiskinda.”
Author's Note: I chose to recreate this story because it was one of my favorite parts of the Ramayana. It was also one of the most significantly changed stories between the two versions that we've read, so I thought it might be fun to give my take on the events that occurred.
Bibliography: Buck, William (1976). Ramayana: King Rama's Way.
Author's Note: I chose to recreate this story because it was one of my favorite parts of the Ramayana. It was also one of the most significantly changed stories between the two versions that we've read, so I thought it might be fun to give my take on the events that occurred.
Bibliography: Buck, William (1976). Ramayana: King Rama's Way.
Hi Austin! I liked how you showed the contrast between the brothers and defended Rama's actions in a way that Vali was able to realize what exactly had happened. It was nice to see that before he died, Vali saw the errors in his ways and was able to try to amend his actions by showing that he really did love his brother and wanted him to be king in Vali's place. It was an interesting brotherly dynamic, and you portrayed it well. Good job!
ReplyDeleteAustin, I really liked the creativeness of your story! It was really interesting to see how you pointed out that Vali was able to see through what happened. You pointed out that Rama was a good guy and that Vali was able to repent his actions later by helping out his brothers. You created a good narrative about family importance and brotherly love, which was well described in your story. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHey Austin, this was a great retelling of a great story! I also liked this story and chose to retell it, although my story ended a bit differently. I like how your story had a similar ending to the reading, but that this ending was brought about by different circumstances. I have to agree with Vali that what Rama did was a little cowardly, but I'm sure Rama could have faced Vali face to face as well.
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